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Crawl

All bones will break.
All blood will clot.
All flesh will rot.
Slowly she would kill them all.
Teach them what its like to crawl.
Through the blood and rotting muck.
Swords and knives all painted red as she went from room to room.
Killing them all one by one.
Leave a little trinket and it's all done.
She grins a little having a little fun.
Then she realized he was the last before her work was done.
He tried to hide.
In the end she killed him hiding in his parents bedroom.
His dead eyes stared at her as she took the final step by killing a little bit of her own soul yet again.
©2005-2009 ~miserydesoul
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Submitted: September 21, 2005
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Borcum struck a couple days ago this is crappy but it seems to hit the mood I'm in
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wow deep and morbid.. sure you no steal my inner poe.. alll my works ahve me.. happy.. well for me at least.. no death or anything.. it sadens me for I miss my inner evilness *pouts*

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"In times long ago it is said, that we walk side by side with the dead" -- Edgar Allen Poe

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o.o Very very nice there Miz. The end seems a little rushed. For instance, maybe you could describe exactly how she gets to killing him. Instead of just jumping from he runs and hides and now he's dead. But you know, it's already great, so that's really up to you. :D

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"...makes me search for an answer I don't want to know, it's like a plague from below, killing all that I know, one hundred voices the same, drench their sorrow in flame..."

-"Sons of Plunder" by Disturbed
oooh thats cool i like teh violent'ness
the way you describe the blood and muck and everything...COOL!!
:thumbsup: nice job :boogie: :D

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Will :headbang: for :beer: \m/

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